Page 14 Redo

I took all comments into consideration and came up with this composition. It definitely makes more sense now. And the orders are being yelled from Chief Kelley who is not in the frame. As for the bottom frame, I realize it is difficult to understand what you are seeing, but it will be clear once the shading and coloring are done. Thanks for all the observations!

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  1. I like this much better. What a great composition – and the guys appear as individuals. It looks like you are really benefitting from all this feedback. Great job Leda!

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