4 thoughts on “Takin’ it for a spin: page 16

  1. Wow! I love the layout. That center panel is great- and the story line is so full of suspense.
    Excellent.

    • I’m hoping that Burrell’s character is building and the reader is getting a sense of who he is. Atleast who he is in a dire situation! I only have 5 or so additional pages till the end of Chapter one.

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