Page 14 Redo

I took all comments into consideration and came up with this composition. It definitely makes more sense now. And the orders are being yelled from Chief Kelley who is not in the frame. As for the bottom frame, I realize it is difficult to understand what you are seeing, but it will be clear once the shading and coloring are done. Thanks for all the observations!

The plot thickens, The current quickens

This is the page you’ve been waiting for… now you find out a little of why he is stuck on this ice floe, and something about who he is. I haven’t drawn the outlines of the speech and thought bubbles at this stage. I do that in a different program, and the shape of the bubble will add to the expression of what is being said.

A Rough of page 7

As Burrell gets closer, things get kind of crazy. Thousands of people are gathering, watching in horror. Chief Kelley attempts to communicate to Burrell, and encourage him to prepare to do the unthinkable… jump.