What I’d like to hear are your immediate reactions to the look/feel of this page. I didn’t finish adding the color on the upper left frame, and I left out Hecock’s thought bubble in the lower left frame, but the rest is done. Looks like I’m going to go with a gray tone underpainting… that’s where you do all the shading and most of the details in black, white and grays. Then I apply layers of color over that and beef up the ink lines.
How do you like the coffee stained background behind the frames? Is the color too intense and distracting or is it exciting to look at and keeps your interest?
Is the text telling you enough that you understand what is going on, (as much as I intend for you to understand! There is always a little left out for the sake of mystery.)